Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism bring to individual and society
Due to the globalisation, everyone can easily travel from one country to other nation. Due to this reason, tourism is augmented day by day. It gives a lot of benefits individual and society, which I can portray in the subsequent segments.
Further more, the tourist are come from other nations, they do not know how to go there. So, they can book the taxi and private cars for going other places. In that's way, they give employment to those person, who are unemployed and give the opportunity to earn bread and butter. For example, tourist arrange the taxi and going some places, and the owner of convince bring good profits and its aftermath are good.
In conclusion, everyone has their own views I don't deny any of them. But, I cogitate, due to lack of education many people are unemployed in my country. Is the Tourister visit there, so the alter there the financial condition of peoples and they havoc employment
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- Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism bring to individual and society 11
- Tourism is an ever growing industry.What benefits do you think tourism bring to individual and society 11
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...and butter. For example, tourist arrange the taxi and going some places, and the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 161.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74534161491 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52299329337 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670807453416 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5701037849 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.4 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0649445626528 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.024682188936 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351328870982 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425812697809 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412175808003 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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