Tourism is an ever growing industry. But the benefits do you think tourism bring to individual and society
Due to the globalisation, everyone can easily travel from one country to other nation. Due to this reason, tourism is augmented day by day. It gives a lot of benefits individual and society, which I can portray in the subsequent segments.
To begin with, there is a plethora of profits to tourist or come from other countries. In some places are dependent on tourist, because in the advent of tourist, they what is the clothes for wearing and living in hotels and they give good profits. In this way, the peoples are a good profits from tourist.
Further more, the tourist are come from other nations, they do not know how to go there. So, they can book the taxi and private cars for going other places. In that's way, they give employment to those person, who are unemployed and give the opportunity to earn bread and butter. For example, tourist arrange the taxi and going some places, and the owner of convince bring good profits and its aftermath are good.
In conclusion, everyone has their own views I don't deny any of them. But, I cogitate, due to lack of education many people are unemployed in my country. Is the Tourister visit there, so the alter there the financial condition of peoples and they havoc employment
- You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and was not able to play with you at the weekend. You decide write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,-tell 56
- You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and was not able to play with you at the weekend. You decide write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,-tell 73
- tourism is an ever growing industry What benefits do you think tourism bring to individuals and society 80
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- Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism bring to individual and society 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68202764977 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.459595127 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2735066866 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1538461538 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0508010659441 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0196646584378 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337009943991 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.033194556967 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418144934597 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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