Tourism is an ever growing industry.
What benefits do you think tourism bring to individual and society
Due to the globalisation, everyone can easily travel from one country to other nation. Due to this reason, tourism is augmented day by day. It gives a lot of benefits individual and society, which I can portray in the subsequent segments.
To begin with, there is a plethora of profits to tourist or come from other countries. In some places are dependent on tourist, because in the advent of tourist, they what is the clothes for wearing and living in hotels and they give good profits. In this way, the peoples are a good profits from tourist. In addition, Government also take profits from tourist those are coming from other nations. They make good at places like shopping malls, public places. So get the right there, and purchase the things.
Further more, the tourist are come from other nations, they do not know how to go there. So, they can book the taxi and private cars for going other places. In that's way, they give employment to those person, who are unemployed and give the opportunity to earn bread and butter. For example, tourist arrange the taxi and going some places, and the owner of convince bring good profits and its aftermath are good.
In conclusion, everyone has their own views I don't deny any of them. But, I cogitate, due to lack of education many people are unemployed in my country. Is the Tourister visit there, so the alter there the financial condition of peoples and they havoc employment
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41932552584 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.272138077 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0625 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0497507541456 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0171589919427 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300966300689 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0349008935932 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380937168103 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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