You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony.
Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter:
- Explain that you have completed your studies
- Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code
- Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for
Hi Mom and Dad,
How've you guys been? I know it's been a while since I've written to you'll but to be honest I was busy with my finals. You know how stressful I get when exams are around the corner. Anyways, good news is that my semester has ended and I've completed my studies at the university with first class level. Also our college management have organized a special ceremony for fellow graduates and I would love to share this moment with you both, so I was hoping if you two could make some time and drop down at my college campus for the function.
The programme is scheduled next weekend on Saturday the 14th. It commences from 10:00 am onwards and guess who the Chief Guest is? Its none other than Sylvester Stylon! Can you imagine?; our very own Rocky will be in the same premises right in front of us. Apparently Mr.Stylone completed his course from this institute. I knew that you are a big fan of Rocky series Dad, maybe that's the main reason why you forced me to join this university. Since our hollywood hero will address this event the department has kept a cinematic theme dress code to make this occassion fun and interesting!
Guests will be granted access only if they carry tickets. So please do not forget to bring them with you along with your IDs without which people will not be allowed through the gate. I am sending five tickets, two for you and remaining three for our neighbours Cathy, John and Kepler. I know they idolize Sylvester sir and they would love to see him.
Can't wait to see you all. Take care!
Love
Manu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...uys been? I know its been a while since Ive written to youll but to be honest I was...
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Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...w its been a while since Ive written to youll but to be honest I was busy with my fin...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... news is that my semester has ended and Ive completed my studies at the university ...
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Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... the university with first class level. Also our college management have organized a...
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Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Stylone
...ses right in front of us. Apparently Mr.Stylone completed his course from this institut...
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Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...re a big fan of Rocky series Dad, maybe thats the main reason why you forced me to jo...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...sir and they would love to see him. Cant wait to see you all. Take care! Love...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, apparently, but, first, if, may, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 285.0 206.0 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48771929825 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22789058539 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 127.690721649 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659649122807 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6579013991 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9375 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203422263988 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547217900871 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359283863778 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108255331101 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280024662253 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.