You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony.
Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter:
– Explain that you have completed your studies
– Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code
– Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for
To begin with, I received the result today and I have passed the final semester exam with all A's along with the final year project presentation.
Further to this, our university is arranging a graduating ceremony, in the Millennium hall, located in south-west England. it will held on 5/9/19, this weekend. Moreover, the arrival time is 8:00 am. Besides, you have to follow the dress code, you have to be dressed formal, it is a black-tie event.
In addition, only two members of the family are allowed for every student, I did try to have extra seats so that I could invite my sister too, but there is a limited number of seats that can fit in the room. so I would be delightful to have you both here.
Please, do let me know if you can make it. I hope to see you soon.
Yours sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...final year project presentation. Further to this, our university is arranging a ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...um hall, located in south-west England. it will held on 5/9/19, this weekend. More...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
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Suggestion: So
...mber of seats that can fit in the room. so I would be delightful to have you both ...
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, so, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 665.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 147.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52380952381 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44531093314 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707482993197 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8151318648 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8888888889 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246510040393 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899280394007 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616011509409 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102542719563 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595147032606 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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