You will go to London soon to stay there for one year. Letter to an agency to get information about accommodation. In your letter write
why you are going to London
what kind of accommodation you want
when you will arrive
Dear sir,
I am contacting with regards to an accomodation for my stay in London for a year as I am moving there for my fashion designing course at Lambeth University London, commencing 1st May 2021.
I am Looking for a fully furnished 1 BHK flat on ground floor, somewhere near to the university. I would also require it to have internet access and security features installed. It is highly appreciated if there could be other blocks of apartment near mine and some shops as I hardly knew much about the place getting my daily essentials in the vicinity would be a great help.
As for my arrivals, I intend to arrive on 28 April at the London airport. My flight is expected to land at the airport by 6:00 p.m, and I can hire a taxi to reach my accommodation. Should you need any details, please do not hesitate to get in touch via text or phone call.
Waiting for a prompt reply from you.
Regards,
Harsimran
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...loor, somewhere near to the university. I would also require it to have internet ...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cted to land at the airport by 6:00 p.m, and I can hire a taxi to reach my accomm...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52976190476 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6483145605 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3965539176 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.125 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15915517213 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600534494449 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600250075154 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107442143749 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502941106686 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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