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Dear Mr.Fderix,
I am writing to let you know that regarding the courses of photography under Film department at your university. The photography courses have been influenced me since the level of my education commence from an early stage. If I am admitted into your academy, I will become a dream photo journal specialist.
However, the University of the kingdom has published prominent photo journal courses on their website. Although, I am found regular tuition fees for respective subjects chronologically, unfortunately, the subject cinema photo which is my favorite subject that not included in details such as a residential cost, international students term waivers, and part-time work permit, etc except the duration of this course. In addition, I have dialed a telephone number to the administration office, they are not able to provide me sufficient study information.
Finally, I am obeyed your information center but extremely intend to you pertaining the Cinema study to my desire compliment.
I would request to you kindly provide me with the essential review points: The daily life of course materials participation, flawless methods of transcript submission, academy entire tutorials fees from entry to exit, and the degree name where is written at your department?
Thank you for your assist I look forward to receiving your information.
Kind regards,
Me. Radexle
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Fderix
Dear Mr.Fderix, I am writing to let you know that reg...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'materials'' or 'material's'?
Suggestion: materials'; material's
...review points: The daily life of course materials participation, flawless methods of tran...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, look, regarding, in addition, of course, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47222222222 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11237848965 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685185185185 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.1213409308 44.8134815571 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.2 76.5299724578 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 4.34317383033 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21598525334 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795905926887 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609471072724 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126514840437 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385607764325 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 8.37731958763 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 70.7449484536 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 8.71597938144 166% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 41.2886597938 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.