Some people say that music is the good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
What extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The number of people express that music is the best guideline to altogether by following each cultural combination instead of race, religious and color. Somebody told that song is the food of heart even rock music sometimes provide cultural lag and also disorder respective society.
However, music will already conquer the apex society of the state not only for the special classes people but now challenging caste also get inspiration from the music. A renowned music compositor compose a song rhythmic while he tunes her different kind if song. If any singer tune perfectly right focal point, the music will play pivotal role to the all classes audiences. A sound song is being bare advancement message origin country to transnational line that help us a great opportunity of the unity. For instance, Jazz and rock music are posses it position toward a young generation. Eastern and western musical instrument may identify their respective culture, heritage among the world society.
On the other hand, African traditional and jazz, rock music shown colon culture integration in the teenager community. Western music now pervasively occupy worldwide as a result most if the heritage society erode their social value instead of holding instinct habitant. Young generation may imitate blindly other cultural music in the welfare of sky culture and social media. In the 21st century the 5th revolution; artificial intelligent, science technology social platform like YouTube , facebook , Instagram are the common example of introduce one culture to another culture. And finally it affect our respective culture that will continue a long time.
To sum up, a better composite music assist international co-operation through their norms value but impure music exercise vampire another cultural origin. So we can not accept any musical ideology without relentless justice that destroy homeland original heritage music.
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also, but, finally, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45791245791 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67618722326 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659932659933 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.032643787 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.066666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153235297518 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530321997829 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318096056085 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984695539098 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145902634582 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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