Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot abSome people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?out a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
Clothes are one of the basic necessity for human beings. The fashion industry has changed a lot, and also the type of material which was used in the past has also seen some advancement with its features. The traditional patterns for clothes have remained same so far, with minor changes here and there. Lately, it is been argued that it is possible to judge a person's character along with with his culture by looking at the clothes he/she is wearing; the idea is discussed in below paragraphs.
The sports enthusiast can always be seen wearing the attire which provides freedom for their movement. Firstly, the clothing made of hybrid cotton and nylon is preferable by the athletes. Such material not only provides flexibility but also breathing to the skin. Glancing at such outfit, one can easily justify their hard-working character but it is difficult to judge there culture.
Secondly, the turbans signify a lot about Hindu culture. The Sikh religion always admires to wear one, traditionally known as "PAGADI" or in Maharashtrian culture, it is famously known as "PHETA". The use of such turbans has frail in recent years, people prefer wearing it only during festivals. Whereas, the Muslim community wear's a white cap, which signifies the mohammadian religion. Such part of clothing might tell us about person culture but it is impossible to comment on the character of the person by the cap or turban.
Whereas, people who are living a spiritual life with the altruist mindsets, have a simple but noticeable attire. Like for example, Monk prefers wearing orange clothes which are admired from Gautam Buddha and also the Jain followers have white clothing throughout there life. This may signify there culture, along with the calm and ascetic character.
To sum up with, it is immensely difficult to judge a persons character and culture which they follow, by just looking at their clothes they are wearing and morally one should avoid passing comments based on someone's attire as it may hurt someone' feelings.
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11940298507 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72866519061 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4671601743 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.882352941 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198322114653 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577162749139 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638171349336 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101998909197 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297526991397 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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