You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment In your letter 1 describe the problem with the equipment 2 explain how this problem is affecting you

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction over the printer which I purchased last week and here is my receipt number: 22003345.

It worked fine for 2 to 3 days. However, since then it is having connectivity issues, This issue is sporadic due to which I am unable used it. Besides this, whenever it prints the letter are not sharp as shown in the broucher. I have contacted the customer and they are unable to find the root cause. And asked to me to contact you for replacement.

I am a lecturer, and frequently, make lecture handout notes for my students, so that it can help them in understanding the classes. Since the problem started, I have not been able to bring printed study materials for my pupils and it is getting difficult for me to teach without them. This is not only making the teaching strenuous for me but also giving students a hard time understanding the topic.

This experience was entirely unacceptable, and I would like to request a full refund or the complete replacement of the existing printer.

I would appreciate it if you can look into this matter at your earliest convenience.

Yours Sincerely,
Sam

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lete replacement of the existing printer I would appreciate it if you can look in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66995073892 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72060362753 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625615763547 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 203.0 16.3608247423 1241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 948.0 76.5299724578 1239% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 203.0 16.8248392259 1207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 47.0 4.34317383033 1082% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206109414196 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206109414196 0.0766984524023 269% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982455816782 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530771020191 0.0580467560999 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 102.1 8.37731958763 1219% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -117.65 70.7449484536 -166% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 80.1 7.45979381443 1074% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.29 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.21 7.59969072165 226% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 8.62886597938 626% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 83.2 8.54432989691 974% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 8.15463917526 662% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.