A friend from another country is moving to your city for work He she has asked you for advice about living in your city Write a letter to your friend In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your c

Dear John,

It's been ages since I've heard from you. I hope you and your family are well. It is good to hear that you are moving to Melbourne. It'll be my pleasure in sharing some valuable tips about this city.

I would suggest you to take accommodation in the northern region of Melbourne. In the northern region, the suburbs are good and well-equipped with all the facilities, so you don't have to drive far. There are some beautiful parks in the north side of Melbourne which you couldn't find those types across the city. You can jog, walk, or you can take your dog with you.

One of the significant benefits of northern side suburbs is that they are well-connected with the rest of the city through public transport. There are plenty of bus, train and trams stations in the area. So there is no hassle in travelling via public transport.

Moreover, there are some interesting places where you can meet new people and make friends such as pubs, bars, restaurants. The northern suburbs neighbourhoods are some of the best neighbourhoods in Melbourne.

Your lovingly

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, Its been ages since Ive heard from you. ...
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Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
Dear John, Its been ages since Ive heard from you. I hope you and your fam...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...quipped with all the facilities, so you dont have to drive far. There are some beaut...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...n the north side of Melbourne which you couldnt find those types across the city. You c...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun bus seems to be countable; consider using: 'plenty of buses', 'plenty of busses'.
Suggestion: plenty of buses; plenty of busses
...ity through public transport. There are plenty of bus, train and trams stations in the area. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81720430108 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68322124752 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1771029425 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.9230769231 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3076923077 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187801978037 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730276187169 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778434017148 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931777110925 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327521356227 0.0580467560999 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.