How are you? It's been a long since we met. I'm writing this letter in good faith and as a good neighbour, wants you to let you know about the problem which me and our community members are facing from your dogs.
There has been a continuously barking sound from your house. While I am a dog lover and understand it is difficult to raise dogs, this type of barking seems to suggest that they are in a bit of distress. I have been continuously distracted from the sound and unable to concentrate on my studies. There are also some complaints from neighbouring houses about this.
I'd like to suggest you that to see a veterinary doctor. There is a very good and experienced doctor who is a friend of mine. I'd recommend him as his clinic is near to our home and I can give a good discount on the appointment.
I believe that you will take this suggestion in a healthy manner. Otherwise as suggested by other community members to report it to the local council. Anyhow, I believe in dialogue and before moving forward, I want you to meet in-person to understand the situation.
I hope you will give this matter your earnest consideration and resolve this smoothly.
Best Regards
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ow are you Its been a long since we met Im writing this letter in good faith and a...
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Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'want'?
Suggestion: want
...r in good faith and as a good neighbour wants you to let you know about the problem w...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
... from neighbouring houses about this Id like to suggest you that to see a veter...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...erienced doctor who is a friend of mine Id recommend him as his clinic is near to ...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a healthy manner" with adverb for "healthy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ieve that you will take this suggestion in a healthy manner Otherwise as suggested by other communi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49065420561 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60374318186 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57476635514 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 214.0 16.3608247423 1308% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 961.0 76.5299724578 1256% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 214.0 16.8248392259 1272% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.0 4.34317383033 668% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314458429901 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.314458429901 0.0766984524023 410% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169830774985 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823425208637 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 106.7 8.37731958763 1274% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -128.81 70.7449484536 -182% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 84.4 7.45979381443 1131% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.24 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.05 7.59969072165 224% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 8.62886597938 626% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 87.6 8.54432989691 1025% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 88.0 8.15463917526 1079% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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