Dear Sam,
Thank you in advance for looking after the house and my pet. I'll make sure to make it up for you after returning.
I'm going on a business trip to Singapore for a week. This business trip is essential for grasping a new contract. I tried to escape this trip but my presence was crucial for this project.
Anyway, I'll provide some details about the house, so it can be easy for you to look after it. I booked an appointment for the repair of the cooler. The repairman will come around 2 pm Saturday. I kept the warranty receipt on the top shelf in my bedroom. So please make sure to be available during their visit.
I would be very thankful if you can also look after my puppy. Sam has been grown since you last saw him. I know you remember all the habits, but he has changed a little bit, such as he likes new cereals which are kept on the kitchen shelves. Make sure to feed him twice a day. He also likes to go for a walk usually in the mornings, but you can take him whenever you've time.
I really appreciate your efforts here for looking after the house. See you in a week.
Yours lovingly,
Sammy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... for looking after the house and my pet Ill make sure to make it up for you after r...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...o make it up for you after returning Im going on a business trip to Singapore f...
^^
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my presence was crucial for this project Anyway Ill provide some details about th...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...was crucial for this project Anyway Ill provide some details about the house so...
^^^
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Ill) must be used with a third-person verb: 'provides'.
Suggestion: provides
...crucial for this project Anyway Ill provide some details about the house so it can ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... sure to be available during their visit I would be very thankful if you can also...
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Line 9, column 160, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...ber all the habits but he has changed a little bit such as he likes new cereals which are ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 357, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you've
... mornings but you can take him whenever youve time I really appreciate your effor...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 367, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...but you can take him whenever youve time I really appreciate your efforts here fo...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, if, look, really, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.1488372093 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09076881168 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586046511628 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 215.0 16.3608247423 1314% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 892.0 76.5299724578 1166% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 215.0 16.8248392259 1278% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 48.0 4.34317383033 1105% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297351230564 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.297351230564 0.0766984524023 388% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178961354525 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104277696473 0.0580467560999 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 105.6 8.37731958763 1261% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -121.37 70.7449484536 -172% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 83.6 7.45979381443 1121% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.27 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.5 7.59969072165 217% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 51.0 8.62886597938 591% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 88.0 8.54432989691 1030% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 88.0 8.15463917526 1079% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.