you work in an international. you need to take some time off work.
Write a letter to your employer. In your letter
1) Explain why you need this time off
2) give details of when you want the time off
3) Say who can do your work when you are away
Dear John,
I would like to apply for 4 weeks’ vacation, as I am planning India visit.
My niece is getting married on March 6th, and as an elder uncle I need to be present in that weeding.
I have joined this team on 1st January 2018, since then I haven't visited my hometown.
I do have sufficient leave balance that I can utilize here.
I was thinking to travel on March 1st and return by March 31st. I was checking air tickets; those are getting booked quickly, if my leaves get approved by this weekend, I will be able to purchase flight tickets on time.
Meanwhile, I have prepared the list of all upcoming projects, that my engagement is expected. I will prepare the knowledge transfer sheet and share with Gaurav. He has agreed to cover me during my absence. I will also discuss with Mick, our client lead, to ensure he is aware about my breaks.
I do understand, I have planned this trip with such short notice, but I also certify that the work timeline won't be delayed.
I am looking forward for your approval, so I can execute my plan.
thank you,
your faithfully,
Shripad Joshi.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 59, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... team on 1st January 2018, since then I havent visited my hometown. I do have suffici...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...leave balance that I can utilize here. I was thinking to travel on March 1st and...
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Line 6, column 64, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... on March 1st and return by March 31st. I was checking air tickets; those are get...
^
Line 6, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble to purchase flight tickets on time. Meanwhile, I have prepared the list of a...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t the work timeline wont be delayed. I am looking forward for your approval, s...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thank
... approval, so I can execute my plan. thank you, your faithfully, Shripad Joshi. ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43367520429 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3404742662 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3076923077 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110125543804 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384585224969 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564453457708 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0349247925392 0.12726935374 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260308453707 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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