Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people health,more and more people eating it.why are more people eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?
Now days Fast Food trend is increasing, though heath adviser recommends to not eat junk food, young generation and adult are attracted towards it, due to a tempting test, colorful texture and easy availability.
The rate of junk food consume is rising day by day, this is causing many health issues like heart diseases, weakness acidity.
The primary reason behind fatty food is getting famous is the busy and hectic schedule and fast lifestyle. everyone are in rush, unhealthy snacks comes very handy and easily eatable, without spending lots of time or efforts.
secondly, the media plays essential role getting such food popular, the advertisement shows how the leading actor or actress enjoy some of these consecutive food and soft drinks, which is misguiding their follower.
There are many methods to reduce this issue, firstly individual should start avoiding the intake of unhealthy food, and one should follow the healthy diet. If needed consult with healthcare professional and follow their guidance.
Parents or guardian should opening discuss this matter with the youngsters and suggest them to create a food planner, which can help them to track calories they consume per day.
Teenagers should not fall in multimedia trap and before getting attracted towards overrated advertised food, they should read its incidence and understand its consequence on health.
Finally, the audits, having tight scheduled, should start planning their foodstuffs so they can avoid last minute meal.
To conclude, Medical authorities continually publishing warnings to not eat such junk but the ingest of the processed food has increased, that causing health problems.
any person can overcome with this issue by following strike diet and considering heath as primary asset.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Everyone
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4476534296 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54868021333 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671480144404 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9444085094 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.75 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160706003958 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569433015496 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399223803158 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642552708923 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333150803354 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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