Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people health,more and more people eating it.why are more people eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?
These days, the consumption of fast food is growing at an alarming rate. There is an argument that people are eating fast food knowing the repercussions associated with it. I too agree with this argument because it has got lot many varieties to attract food lovers and it can be solved by taking some special measures.
First and foremost cause for increase in consuming fast food is that it has got lot many dishes for foodies to taste. This is because many restaurants had explored this cuisine to satisfy their customer’s taste buds. As in the process of exploration, many styles of cooking have been introduced in recent past. For instance, a local junk food restaurant in my city had found a new dish for their customers which suddenly grabbed an attention from all over the public in the city. Therefore, many people are going with the taste irrespective of the precautions from the health experts.
I can suggest two possible solutions to this problem. Firstly, the government should conduct more health awareness programs. For instance, they can go with some physically fit celebrity discussing the health hazards by consuming fast food. This would lead to a greater awareness campaign among the public. Secondly, restaurants should be made responsible in order to guide their customers with healthy food habits. In other words, these eateries should eventually stop treating their customers with junk food instead they should start serving them the healthy diet.
To conclude, the attractive number of varieties in fast food is the primary cause for having a high intake without considering the negative results stated by doctors. However, this problem can be dealt by enlightening people with the help of celebrities and making restaurants responsible while serving their customers.
- In some countries fast food restaurants and supermarkets give money to schools to promote their product Do you think it s a positive or negative development 78
- Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer include any relevant examples 78
- In some countries fast food restaurants and supermarkets give money to schools to promote their product Do you think it s a positive or negative development 78
- Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people health more and more people eating it why are more people eating fast food What can be done about this problem 73
- Many people think that every individual is responsible for their own healthy lifestyle others believe that governments should take care of it Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, then, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91561885941 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523333333333 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6568772575 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.153846154 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220759005424 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790176045492 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745720444805 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14409833683 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615065773081 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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