Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people health,more and more people eating it.why are more people eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?
Physicians around the globe have consensus that fast food is dangerous for human beings health but still its consumption is on the rise. Busy life is one of the reasons that people go for it and authorities should impose taxes on fast food chains plus there should be campaigns to spread awareness about this issue.
While industrialization has brought huge benefits to our lives, it has also affected the daily life in a way that we are not left with time for ourselves. Daily busy route of an average person doesn’t allow him to prepare breakfast, lunch or dinner at home. The best available option is to grab a sandwich or burger from a fast food shop, while a person is aware that it is not healthy and it will have adverse effects on his body. A recent survey in UK by University of Plymouth revealed that eighty five percent of working class is eating ready made food.
This alarming increase can be controlled by the authorities by implementing multiple ways like increasing tax and awareness campaigns. The price of this kind of food will be increased by taxing and people will refrain to buy it. Media campaigns should be started to provide the knowledge of the side effects that a person can face with continuous use of fast foods. Local councils should arrange seminars to shed light on this issue. A study by Gallup international have informed that advises by the celebrities are considered important and people idealise them. Governments should use famous people to convey these messages.
In conclusion, limitation of the free time is pushing people to tend towards fast food and with increased taxes and correct message from responsible people, can have an impact on the usage of unhealthy food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...s that fast food is dangerous for human beings health but still its consumption is on ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...impact on the usage of unhealthy food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, while, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88775510204 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66123153248 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585034013605 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4382793634 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.538461538 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286907127422 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954536805359 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658347928297 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179978233607 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646031361825 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.