Your best friend just had her first baby. You are currently overseas but will be returning to your hometown in a week.
Write to your friend. In your letter
congratulate your friend
tell her when you will be returning home
ask when you could drop in to meet her and the baby
<span style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; white-space: normal;">Dear Emma,</span><br style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; white-space: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; white-space: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; white-space: normal;">I cannot believe I am an aunt now! You have become the mother of a sweet baby girl to make me the happiest person in the world. Many congratulations and my love and blessing for both of you.</span><br style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; white-space: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; white-space: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; white-space: normal;">I regret that I am far away from you. As a matter of fact, I came to Tokyo to attend an official meeting last Monday. My tasks here will occupy me for another week or so I will return to Manhattan on 27th October. I want to see you and your baby as soon as I land. I will probably visit you first and then get back to my apartment.</span><br style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; white-space: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; white-space: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; white-space: normal;">Please do not hesitate to text or call me if you want me to bring anything for you. I will do some shopping for the baby and any suggestion from you is much welcomed.</span><br style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; white-space: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; white-space: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; white-space: normal;">I cannot wait to see you both. I have not heard such thrilling news in decades. My best wished to you all once again.</span><br style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; white-space: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; white-space: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; white-space: normal;">Warm wishes,</span><br style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; white-space: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; white-space: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14.9999px; white-space: normal;">Eugene</span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...px; white-space: normal;'>Dear Emma,
^^
Line 1, column 1835, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... you want me to bring anything for you. I will do some shopping for the baby and ...
^
Line 1, column 2314, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...l;'>I cannot wait to see you both. I have not heard such thrilling news in d...
^
Line 1, column 2777, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...; white-space: normal;'>Warm wishes,
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2787.0 937.175257732 297% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 374.0 206.0 182% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.45187165775 4.54256449028 164% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 3.78020617076 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.17930726735 2.54303337028 204% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.323529411765 0.622605031667 52% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 656.1 290.88556701 226% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 16.3608247423 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 269.21357807 44.8134815571 601% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 309.666666667 76.5299724578 405% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.5555555556 16.8248392259 247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0349873845642 0.216113520407 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515955660439 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663876217077 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0349873845642 0.12726935374 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.4 8.37731958763 411% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.94 70.7449484536 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 3.82989690722 446% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 7.45979381443 290% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 26.82 8.71597938144 308% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.5 8.62886597938 400% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 8.54432989691 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 35.0 8.15463917526 429% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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