Your company has decided to organise a training course for the ploys at the local Convention centre. They have asked you to contact the manager of the local Convention centre. Write a letter to the manager of local Convention Centre
-explain the details of the training course
-tell him what all facilities you would like to have for your training course
-ask him about the facilities at the conventional sent
Dear Sir
I am dweller of Chandigarh and live in sector 10. The purpose of mine to penning down this epistle is to inform you for organise a training course in your conventional centre.
I am employer of Mahindra company in Chandigarh and the companyManager is asked to me for contact the manager of local Convention centre. The company is arranging training course for employees in your Centre. This function is held on 22nd February 2018 and there are 600 in employees are participants in there and this okay Jeen is start on 8 AM to 4 PM so that morning and evening meal is also make for employees.
In this function, you are a range of water for drinking and cheers for setting and sound system for announcing details of course, this facility is arranged by you and tell me about the facilities of conventional Centre. I would be grateful if you tell me all facilities so I would Karke my manager for training course.
Yours sincerely 20th February 2018
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
...o that morning and evening meal is also make for employees. In this function, yo...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for training course. Yours sincerely 20th February 2018 Aman
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69186046512 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74075342071 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2375254883 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.875 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335664413827 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155992253528 0.0766984524023 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136855175691 0.0603063233224 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183921564388 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959202174113 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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