Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot join him/her. You’ve found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Eva,
I hope you and your family is doing well. I was eagerly waiting to watch a fantastic movie with you, however, I have to say sorry this time as I will not be able to come along with you. Let me explain you the reason.
To begin with, I received a message from my esteemed organization that there will a sudden audit tomorrow to review my balance sheet. Moreover, I am into finance department so cannot abscond from the situation as it’s a mandatory. Also, I am the head of the team so has to handover indenture to compliance team.
As for the movie, I am not going to hamper your plan so I have a terrific idea that you can go with my friend Sheela, whom you met last weekend on coffee with me. She is fun loving and jovial in nature. Besides, she’d be the best partner to hang out with you. I am sure you will not get boredom in her company.
I am sorry again for not able to join you on this movie, but I will make sure that next month we will see amazing film together.
Best Regards,
Urvashi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, as for, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22335025381 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23262557772 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629441624365 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2068868123 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3333333333 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318435413199 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107618631217 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101627364296 0.0603063233224 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185850986648 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128120704753 0.0580467560999 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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