Your friend has just moved to a new house, you want to send him a gift. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter, you should tell:
• what you will send to him as gift
• why you chose it as gift
• how you will send it to him.
Dear Jacob,
I hope you're doing good. I'm just writing to congratulate you on moving into a new house and beware of the arrival of your house-warming present.
Remember last time we went shopping at R City mall? You were totally impressed by the hot air balloon showpiece in one of the stores. That's what I've picked to gift you so that it will look cool on the new furniture set you are bringing in.
You know what? It's not just a showpiece but transforms into a small table lamp. How amazing is that! I couldn't think of any better gift than that for your home. It'll reside near the sofa set, also will shower ambient soothing light in dusky evenings.
I've already asked the store manager to deliver it to your place. He will send it through an express mail within 3 days. By the way, I've given your new address and phone number. As soon as the delivery guy reaches, he shall call you.
All the best.
David
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: you're
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Suggestion: I'm
...ar Jacob, I hope youre doing good. Im just writing to congratulate you on mov...
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Suggestion: That's
...balloon showpiece in one of the stores. Thats what Ive picked to gift you so that it ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...wpiece in one of the stores. Thats what Ive picked to gift you so that it will look...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...mall table lamp. How amazing is that! I couldnt think of any better gift than that for ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... soothing light in dusky evenings. Ive already asked the store manager to deli...
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Suggestion: I've
...express mail within 3 days. By the way, Ive given your new address and phone number...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51176470588 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17431530805 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.747058823529 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1705050924 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.7857142857 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1428571429 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379286498554 0.216113520407 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104088318376 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881277352002 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207318198389 0.12726935374 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255983729092 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.99 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.