Grandparents play a big role in bringing up the children.
Do you think it is useful for grandparents? Discuss reasons with your opinion and give relevant examples.
Children are unique and malleable upcoming generation. In young child's life there is a major part of their grandparents in their upbringing. In my opinion, this is beneficial for the older people as well because they pass down their cultural values and take special care of their young ones.
Firstly, elders always make sure to preach good moral values to their children. They find a sense of responsibility upon them to pass down the cultural values to next generation. Despite reluctance of their child, they make sure to imbibe the teachings which they have learnt from their ancestors. For instance, In a muslim family the knowledge of reading Arabic language is taught by the elders to their children from a very young age so that they can read the Holy Quran. This legacy passed on by the grandparents indeed bring them peace.
Secondly, old people have a keen eyesight over their children. They always take special care of their younger children. They are not only the one's who love them the most but also are the one's to protect them from getting a beating from their parents. This extra attention brings energy for living and need to stay alive with their kid to see him grown up is always their desire. It is observed by many that elders always want to see their children succeed in their future, which brings them joy. Some are said to be awaiting to see their grandchildren's wedding so that they live long enough.
To sum up, In my view it is very much important for the children to be preached by their grandparents which in turn benefits them for passing down their legacy and love.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in my opinion, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74021352313 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39032022536 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526690391459 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3104279393 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108984368074 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492417063953 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428913403916 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900725126903 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304653155881 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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