Your friend has just won a sizeable amount of money in the lottery. She would like your advice as to how to spend it.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
-congratulate him/her on their win
-give practical advice on how to spend the money
-advise him/her on benefits/drawbacks associated with large wins
Dear Surbhi,
I hope you are doing well by the grace of Almighty. Yesterday, I heard from your Facebook post that you have won a lottery of around ten thousand dollars from Dream eleven website by playing a lottery game.
Many congratulations on your winning a hefty amount of price and as we had spoken on the call, let me give you some advice to spent the winning amount. Firstly, you could start investing in stocks as it will help you in the financial growth but you need to have a learning and understanding of stock market graphs such as line bar and candle stick. So, you need to buy different courses of stock markets and you could use the winning prize money. I understand that some investing will be painstaking of your finances, learning and time but it will give you an immense results of profits in future.
if you'll use the prize money in other things like shopping, traveling, and others things. It will only last fun for a short time period. Thus, please invest the money to build your assets rather than spending on your desired things.
I hope that I'm able to provide a suitable guidance to use your prize money. Spent your money properly. Bye for now.
Warm Regards,
Shain Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Surbhi, I hope you are doing well by the grace o...
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Line 5, column 569, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'result'?
Suggestion: result
...nd time but it will give you an immense results of profits in future. if youll use ...
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Line 5, column 588, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... give you an immense results of profits in future. if youll use the prize money in ot...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...mense results of profits in future. if youll use the prize money in other thin...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...se results of profits in future. if youll use the prize money in other things lik...
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Suggestion: I'm
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, thus, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62962962963 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36078429111 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.123851945 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9230769231 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234318141746 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880152300337 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922290756398 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152028595584 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469631411931 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.