Your friend has moved to another country. He or she is coming back to your country for a visit. You have arranged a party. Write a letter to your friend about the following- Give the date and location of the party- Say who is coming to the party- Give a b

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Your friend has moved to another country. He or she is coming back to your country for a visit. You have arranged a party. Write a letter to your friend about the following

- Give the date and location of the party
- Say who is coming to the party
- Give a brief update on your common friends lives

Dear XYZ,

I am delighted to learn from your brother about your short-period return from the abroad in the mid of next month. Therefore, I have decided to write you about a get-together event arranged in your honor on 20th Jan 2019. We are cognizant that you are on a short trip and would like to revitalize the memories of our friendship. The event is scheduled in your favorite country club, wherein we all used to spend our good time. The timing would be from 6 pm - 10 pm, so please earmark this time in your schedule.

You will be glad to know the attendees of this evening, especially Tracy, Jack, and Micheal. Like myself, they are also eager to see you after long-time and share about their life events. A lot has been changed during this time.

It is pertinent to give you a heads up about Tracy and Jack relationship and you've guessed right, they are getting married! Also, Micheal is doing great in her money management business and planning to expand the horizon of her business to Asia. There are interesting surprises waiting for you and I hope that the evening will be well spent.

I wish you safe travel back to home

Yours truly,

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'head'
Suggestion: head
... time. It is pertinent to give you a heads up about Tracy and Jack relationship an...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you've
...p about Tracy and Jack relationship and youve guessed right, they are getting married...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58173076923 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40412410936 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658653846154 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5358067967 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6363636364 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197800485472 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726970558081 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056733144147 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909832972964 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05734773214 0.0580467560999 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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