Your friend is searching for a job, write a letter to your friend.
• Describe the details of the job
• Why it is suitable for him/her
• How to apply for the job.
Dear priya,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you in pink of the health.I am writing this letter to let you know about the job vacancies in my company.
In the last weekend I meet our school friend Ritu .she said me that you are searching a job,so I have a good news for you.you know I have been working in TCS ,and my company has a requirement of computer engineers.company wants the software programmer who have a better knowledge about programming languages.I known you are very good in programming languages ,and you have long experience about software development,therefore I decided to tell about you for this golden apportunity.I know you will be happy to get this job.
In next two days our company release the employment news in times of India news paper.In that news all details are given to applying for this job post,also address and time are given.that is why you prepare for the interview and send me your updated resume , and I will forward it to my HR department.I wish you get this job.
Hoping to see you soon.
with love,
Nisha.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... letter finds you in pink of the health.I am writing this letter to let you know ...
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Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...st weekend I meet our school friend Ritu .she said me that you are searching a job...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
...kend I meet our school friend Ritu .she said me that you are searching a job,so I ha...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...she said me that you are searching a job,so I have a good news for you.you know I h...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
... that you are searching a job,so I have a good news for you.you know I have been working in...
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Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... you.you know I have been working in TCS ,and my company has a requirement of comp...
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Suggestion: I
...r knowledge about programming languages.I known you are very good in programming ...
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Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'knew'?
Suggestion: knew
...knowledge about programming languages.I known you are very good in programming langua...
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Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...u are very good in programming languages ,and you have long experience about softw...
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Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'experienced'.
Suggestion: experienced
...rogramming languages ,and you have long experience about software development,therefore I ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , therefore
...ng experience about software development,therefore I decided to tell about you for this go...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...l about you for this golden apportunity.I know you will be happy to get this job....
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Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...e the employment news in times of India news paper.In that news all details are given to a...
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Suggestion: In
...yment news in times of India news paper.In that news all details are given to appl...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , also
... are given to applying for this job post,also address and time are given.that is why ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nterview and send me your updated resume , and I will forward it to my HR departme...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...d I will forward it to my HR department.I wish you get this job. Hoping to see...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...t this job. Hoping to see you soon. with love, Nisha.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71808510638 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88112607033 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606382978723 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 189.147796416 44.8134815571 422% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.833333333 76.5299724578 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 16.8248392259 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211757409194 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849137813327 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798404888102 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117675915953 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798848702153 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 8.37731958763 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.