Dear Rakesh,
I am writing this mail to reply to your mail about the untimely demise of your uncle and your request to send your kids to our house for the weekend. We will be happy to take care of your children so that you can visit your uncle's family.
I am really sorry to hear about the unfortunate accident of your paternal uncle. However, I can understand that you want to support his family and at the same time you want your kids to be away from that environment. So I'll be glad to help you in these hard times of yours. I want to let you know that I will be available at home full day on Saturday and Sunday, but, I'll have to go to visit a doctor for my dental check-up, but my wife will be home to look after the children.
I assure you that your children won't get bored. We have a whole bunch of animation movies as well as many toys for my nephew, that they will enjoy. Moreover, My wife knows many continental dishes to cook, therefore we will make a variety of food for the kids. And most importantly, we won't leave them alone.
So without worrying about your children you visit your uncle's family and perform your responsibilities, while we will look after your kids as long as you are not home.
Sincerely,
Raju Roshan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ds to be away from that environment. So Ill be glad to help you in these hard times...
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Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...e full day on Saturday and Sunday, but, Ill have to go to visit a doctor for my den...
^^^
Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Ill) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ll day on Saturday and Sunday, but, Ill have to go to visit a doctor for my dental c...
^^^^
Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: WHOLE_LOT[1]
Message: Use simply 'bunch'.
Suggestion: bunch
...your children wont get bored. We have a whole bunch of animation movies as well as many toy...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, while, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32340425532 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3096389046 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548936170213 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7434104488 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6666666667 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282554384902 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106594047483 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082234466131 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192047421843 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633171950765 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.