We can notice plenty of people doing an unwanted job for their lifetime and do not try to improve it in any way. Those folks believe that because of various reasons they cannot or don't want to change their situation, while there are people who advocate the view that anyone should keep trying to elevate their job and monetary situation. I strongly agree with the latter group of people, who believe in putting efforts to develop themselves instead of just accepting the condition and doing nothing.
If we magnify the belief system of those who accept their unsatisfying job and money crunching situation, they have a predefined perception for their lives. Most dangerous one is that they don’t want to leave their comfort zones. For better understanding, assume a person who is working in a company in his own hometown. Now he is getting better career opportunities with higher pay grades, but he would not accept just because he does not want to leave his hometown. He is afraid of new responsibilities and not comfortable adapting to a new environment. Second, the weakest reason can be that these people have either failed too many times in life to put in efforts now or they don’t want to face failure in life. Both of these attitudes will hold back anyone to think beyond their problems and situation, and eventually they start believing that this is their fate to live in the shortage of money and do mundane jobs for a lifetime.
On the other hand, the portion of people who believe that it is worth putting extra effort to escalate their current life is actually risk-takers. These people actually think that if they try to achieve higher goals in life, and even though they might not reach there, still they will be at least one step ahead of their last situation. To illustrate, someone is not happy with the web development job he does on a daily basis and he really loves to do data crunching. He decided to change the job and started to look for a Data Analytics job and eventually he landed a data research job to start his career as a data analyst. In other words, he could start a change in his life by having a basic job in the field he was interested in and he can grow his career exponentially by giving his best.
Weighing up both sides of the argument, from my perspective, one should consider putting in efforts to achieve what he admires and in the worst-case scenario, he might get a leap in that direction. However, doing nothing is not going to take him anywhere and he will have to face the same challenges and boredom of a monotonous job for his whole life.
- Today many young people change their jobs or careers every few years What do you think are the reasons for this Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages 73
- There are many different types of music in the world today Why do we need music Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is here everywhere nowadays 56
- A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree High salary jobs are generally more stressful 84
- Nowadays sports is a big business with high earnings for professional sports people and companies involved both financially and other ways Is this a positive or negative development for sports 73
- The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...cause of various reasons they cannot or dont want to change their situation, while t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, look, really, second, so, still, while, at least, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 24.0651302605 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2138.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 463.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61771058315 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54541845317 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494600431965 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.9520240077 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.764705882 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2352941176 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130138521773 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466212933364 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321741521508 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846224755766 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383875238925 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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