Dear Sir or Madam,
I writing this letter to bring to your notice that I have different opinions than your recent article, in which it states that all town centres are similar to each other in the country. It does not hold the truth.
I must admit that the writer of the article might had visited a few town centres before writing it because he/she mentioned some factually correct information. For instance, all the town centres are congested compared to the outskirts of the town and on weekends it gets incredibly crowded.
However, I completely disagree with the piece of the article where it mentions that all the town centres of India look heritage and the town municipal corporation does not maintain hygiene. The city centre is the most beautiful place in my town. The municipal corporation has rebuilt many ancient buildings which may be riskier for others. Additionally, the government workers clean the road twice a day and citizens of my town are aware of keeping up the hygiene of the city and therefore they throw rubbish in the allocated dustbins only.
Considering the writer’s view, I believe he/she might have missed out on town to visit and I will be more than glad to guide him in touring the city. Everyone who visits the city centre here expresses the same view that it is the cleanest and most lovely place in the city.
I hope you would present the corrected article soon and mention our town as an example to others.
Yours sincerely,
Rahul Chabra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
Dear Sir or Madam, I writing this letter to bring to your no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81712062257 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46868684784 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5953307393 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.219217586 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.166666667 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226266405763 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760484316104 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880775767971 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126282159536 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108948721587 0.0580467560999 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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