Your landlord wants to increase your house rent. Write a letter to him to explain your situation.In your letter, you should tell:– why you think the rent shouldn’t be increased– what you will do if it is increased.

Essay topics:

Your landlord wants to increase your house rent. Write a letter to him to explain your situation.

In your letter, you should tell:

– why you think the rent shouldn’t be increased

– what you will do if it is increased.

Dear Mr John,

I am Ell Green and residing in one of your rented apartments. My apartment address is 749, Woodside Avenue. I am writing in response to your letter in which you have informed about the monthly rent increment by 10% and very much upset with this news.

With regards to the rent increase, I would like to take a reference from the signed rental agreement, where we have agreed on a fixed monthly rent of Rs. 10000 for one year commencing from June 1, 2019, to May 31, 2019. I have been staying at this property for only 3 months and always paid rent on time. As the rent, I am paying is already on the higher side and I have not yet completed the signed period at this apartment, I feel that it would be against the agreement to increase the rent in such a short span.

I completely understand that apartment life can be expensive. However, I would like you to please reconsider your plan of rent revision. In case, you still feel the need to revise the rent then I am sorry to inform you that I would be forced to vacate this apartment. Once again, I request you to rethink on this increment plan.

I anticipate cooperation from you on this matter.

Yours sincerely,

Ell Green

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, still, then, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5045045045 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4384143995 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59009009009 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2250409344 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3333333333 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280821638546 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109218514745 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748163263815 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167266932856 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761220471397 0.0580467560999 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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