Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people.
Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your e-mail:
suggest a speaker
say what they would contribute to the event
explain why other people would be interested too
Dear Manager,
I am writing this email regarding the upcoming event which will be held on next month. I would like to recommend a versatile, rhetorical skill personality, his name is Rajat Gupta.
Furthermore, Mr. Rajat Gupta is a doctor by profession and he has completed MBBA from Aims New Delhi in 2008. Also, he have been attending multiple seminars related to the books, magazines. Moreover, he has won lot of awards in public speaking workshops. According to my school of learning, his passion and, contribution towards the society can surely enhance the popularity of reading books in people.
I strongly believe that, if you invite Mr. Rajat Gupta as guest speaker, it will create inevitable impact on books readers and there are chances to increase the comprehensive impact on other guests. It would be very beneficial for your shop business, also, your bookshop may get more popular and popularity will bring large number of customers. I feel that if, customers will be increased, you can get more revenue from bookshop.
I hope you may consider my opinion for the same.
Sincerely,
Kuldip Kumar
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...A from Aims New Delhi in 2008. Also, he have been attending multiple seminars relate...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10326086957 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72563423708 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.717391304348 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1426532141 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3636363636 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169899006675 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500000258254 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484264045684 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851929620693 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677616522164 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...A from Aims New Delhi in 2008. Also, he have been attending multiple seminars relate...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10326086957 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72563423708 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.717391304348 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1426532141 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3636363636 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169899006675 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500000258254 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484264045684 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851929620693 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677616522164 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.