Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
Give detail of how you and your friends or family use the centre
Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
Decribe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes.
Dear sir or madam,
I am sukhdeep kaur dweller of kotkpura.i am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction against your decision that you are taking for the clogging of local health and fitness centre.
Actually,this health and fitness academy is being used by me ,my friends and family on regular basis ,me and my friends go there for fitness purposes and for playing some games as every equipment is available there.my family use this centre for
meditation mostly.
As for as its significance is concerned,this Spare time activities centre is facilitate people in myriad of ways such as playing sports,meditation,gym services and just sitting over there for relaxation purposes.
According to me if this centre would be shut down there would be dire impingement on local community ,especially on the children because children currently spend their time in this centre otherwise they may be involved in criminal activities.in spite of this,local people also would deprive from the facilities that they are using.
I hope you will take my concern under consideration before any final decision.
Yours faithfully,
sukhdeep
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... any final decision. Yours faithfully, sukhdeep
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, may, so, well, as for, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39664804469 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1138423983 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675977653631 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.872409252 44.8134815571 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.0 76.5299724578 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 16.8248392259 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 4.34317383033 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125324896781 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071451120377 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509037900177 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566605445756 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407571045122 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 8.37731958763 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 70.7449484536 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 7.45979381443 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 8.71597938144 168% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 8.62886597938 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 8.15463917526 245% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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