Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:
Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing regarding to the news that I have heard about closing our local centre which provides to us sport and leisure activities.
I extremely interested in this place, because twice a week usually we with my family and friends attend it for sport games in the evenings after work. Altogether we play football or do other sport activities to keep fit ourselves. At the same time our children attend a special child room.
As you can understand this centre is essential place for family to build good relationship and keep fit healthy body. Our community will be enormously disappointed if this centre will be closed so it is only place in local community. Another similar one is far from our district. Moreover, it is located in the centre of community, so a lot of family can attend it very easily.
I really cannot imagine what people will do if you finally decide to close our centre. Probably people will spend time more in front of TV and pay less attention family members. Which is really destructive influences on relationships.
I hope you will address these concerns as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Olga
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 378, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot of family can attend it very easily. I really cannot imagine what people will...
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and pay less attention family members. Which is really destructive influences on rel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, really, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80904522613 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.676293407 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653266331658 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9895656805 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6153846154 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165922151685 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535904151988 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046921052046 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764821534876 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436340115293 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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