People spend a lot of money on various things as they earn more money nowadays than before. Is it a positive or negative development?
Due to current social life people tend to spend their money on a lot of different things as they feel more comfortable because they can afford these. I believe that this development is very beneficial for those individuals who earn enough money for life.
One the one hand, earning more than enough money let humans to explore different part of world by travelling for example. This activity allows to find out not only about another culture and countries but also can help with practice foreign language skills for instance if person learns English. As a result it can be beneficial even at work and can lead to professional promotions. If person is curious and self-educational it might awards at work.
On the other hand, in the past people spent less money because of lack of information and social media. Nowadays, is easier for individuals to search about some new things that they want to have. And I consider that it is advantageous that people earn at present time more, so they can afford a lot of things they eager to have. Undoubtedly, this current circumstance of our life exists due to the spread of the internet, social media, and advertising. But people try not only to spend a lot of their money but also they work harder and even overwork.
To summarize, I strongly thing that it is great that people nowadays can buy a lot of products they want to have and these are affordable for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'finding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: finding
...lling for example. This activity allows to find out not only about another culture and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6935483871 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61011400312 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1233010949 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329000852961 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12019579142 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102611652334 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21401306217 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968396289892 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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