Your Manager has asked you to do a presentation at the upcoming training session. Write a letter to your manager and say
– What is the topic of presentation?
– What is the benefit of conducting a session on that topic?
– What are your requirements for conducting this presentation?
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you about my presentation topic which I have to give next Friday during the training session.
I have decided to give the presentation on the new and regulation of the Canada Study Visa. As I am the only one who is handling the filling department of the student visa, it is my duty to make other visa counselors aware of the updated regulation. There are certain changes in the privileges of the students and laws which regulate their living and work rights. For instance, the Quebec government has decided to pay student 160$ every month, if they start learning French.
The most overwhelming benefit will in the counselors use these changes for increasing the sale of the company as they can use this knowledge to make students attracted to our company. They gain easily gain confidence of the client by telling them the advantages of the new laws.
I need a projector for giving my presentation, a marker to illustrate different things and also a socket board for my laptop. It will be a half-hour presentation and will definitely be fruitful for our company and department.
I am very excited about giving this presentation and its desired results.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 428, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$160'.
Suggestion: $160
...c government has decided to pay student 160$ every month, if they start learning Fre...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80032392036 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604761904762 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1039802219 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1818181818 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132501989259 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518279721539 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585252093642 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726960432106 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673657141463 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 428, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$160'.
Suggestion: $160
...c government has decided to pay student 160$ every month, if they start learning Fre...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80032392036 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604761904762 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1039802219 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1818181818 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132501989259 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518279721539 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585252093642 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726960432106 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673657141463 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.