In countries like Japan, the population is getting older, are the effects of aging population on society is negative or positive. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The advancement in the medical, education and food sectors have surely allowed people to enjoy their lives for maximum years. Presently, it has been controversial that whether having older population has useful contribution in development of society or not. Here, this essay will account for both positive and negative sides with my perception.
There are multifarious benefits of this phenomenon. First and foremost, the presence of aging population plays a phenomenal role to evolve moral skills, cultural values and supreme etiquettes among adolescents. As a result, a country produces noble you...
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The advancement in the medical, education and food sectors have surely allowed people to enjoy their lives for maximum years.
The advancement ... has surely allowed people to enjoy their lives for maximum years.
Sentence: manifold drawbacks can be mentioned of this happening. initially, gray generation is accostemed to conventional ways of living and therefore less interested to be technically advancenced.
Error: advancenced Suggestion: advanced
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Sentence: Thus, it can be resposible for many contentions among youngsters and olders.
Error: resposible Suggestion: responsible
Sentence: To encapsulate, there is a renown? axiom ' old is gold'.? encouraging gray generation towards using techonology and being adaptive can be worthwhile to get the best out of them.
Error: techonology Suggestion: technology
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