Individual greed and selfishness has been the
basis of the modern society. Some people
think that we must return to the older and
more traditional values of respect for the
family and the local community in order to
create a better world to live in. To what extent
do you agree or disagree?
Modernity has left an inferior impression on human's characteristics. Nowadays, self-centered and materialistic attitudes of people are making worse to the lifestyle. It is argued that returning to moral values is essential to strengthen relationships with community members to make a pleasant world. Here, I would like to accord with given statement.
To begin with, the approach of selfishness is responsible to cause vulnerable relationships with family and community members. For example, people, being self-centered, want to grind their own axes without caring of other's priorities and righ...
- In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive. 80
- Some people think that men and women have different qualities, which is why men are suitable for some types of jobs and women – for different types of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? 90
- Traditional methods of food preparation are becoming less popular. Why do you think this is?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience. 90
- Some people say that the government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to control violent crimes in society.How far do you agree or disagree this statement ? 77
- some people say that school years are the best years in their lives. Do you agree or disagree with given statement? 80
Comments
Full essay evaluations
Sentence: For example, people, being self-centered, want to grind their own axes without caring of other's priorities and rights in modern socities.
Error: socities Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Apart from it, greediness, sometime, diverts people to join wrong ways which decafe their whole lives.
Error: decafe Suggestion: decade
Sentence: As a result, it will develop strong affinitiy, intimacy and understanding among family.
Error: affinitiy Suggestion: affinity
Sentence: Further emphasizing on my point of view, conforming to past, telling cultural, tradional and inspirational stories by elders by spending quality time with youngsters is likely to be lucrative to shape them noble characters.
Error: tradional Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Besides this, correspondingly to times gone by, elders should guide childern about importance of cultural heritage and historical values to build up respect for dignity of their culture and nation.
Error: childern Suggestion: children
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 339 350
No. of Characters: 1884 1500
No. of Different Words: 220 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.291 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.558 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.079 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 153 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 117 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 87 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 62 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.95 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.874 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.65 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.253 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.494 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.051 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Tnxxx sir ,, how is the use
Tnxxx sir ,, how is the use of conforming and corresponding in above essay ....is it ryt ???
n how r the ideas n requirement met by my essay ???
The essay is fantastic. It
The essay is fantastic. It can get 9.0 without spelling errors.
checjk my essay sir ???