The role of prisons should be to punish criminals who have committed serious crimes. Training courses and education offered to prisoners are a waste of taxpayer's money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The role of prisons should be to punish criminals who have committed serious crimes. Training courses and education offered to prisoners are a waste of taxpayer's money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly, prison, is for those who commit crimes, no matter those crimes are serious offence or petty crimes. Many people hold the opinion that, there should not be any study or training conducted for criminals who commit any sort of crime. While, to some extent I hold the viewpoint that this is acceptable in some level. However, on other hand I tend to disagree with various reasons which I will enunciate below.

On the one hand, many people think that, prison is only applicable to Jailbird who had committed serious crimes. Rape, murder for example, and fraud, whereas, they feel that offe...

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Sentence: This can be possible only when training or proper education is been provided in jails, regime should come forward and take this initiative to make wrongdoer better person.
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