Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, geographical boundaries are no more a barrier for people when choosing a travel destination or settling down in their career. They experience many new things other than location change. Few people are of the view that the travellers should be flexible to adopt new culture while rest hold an entirely different opinion.
In my opinion it is better to adapt the mores of an area as it makes life comfortable. Knowing the local culture gives an upperhand in times of emergency. A foreigner, for instance, might find himself helpless even in a small situation such as crossing the road if he...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...but it will lead to social embarrassment for him. This is owing to the fact that ...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nonetheless,
...comfortable and get accepted by people. Nonetheless they should not hurt others' senti...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'such as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243553008596 0.247107183377 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.137535816619 0.155533422707 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10888252149 0.0946595960268 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0458452722063 0.0501214627716 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0458452722063 0.0437548338989 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126074498567 0.122226691241 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0343839541547 0.0403226058552 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84387168361 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0343839541547 0.0326793684256 105% => OK
Particles: 0.00859598853868 0.00163938923432 524% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.10888252149 0.0861772015684 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.025787965616 0.021408717616 120% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00573065902579 0.011925033212 48% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1895.0 1933.35771543 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 316.048096192 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99683544304 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.354430379747 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.291139240506 0.28420135186 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221518987342 0.203846283523 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139240506329 0.137316102897 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84387168361 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.037074148 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613924050633 0.56093040696 109% => OK
Word variations: 70.7413938694 60.7387585426 116% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.5555555556 20.7743622355 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3679155307 49.517814964 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.277777778 127.492653851 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.7743622355 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 46.6694796062 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.7625 1.69124875643 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241946620495 0.332605444948 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0692654493887 0.102741220458 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0409114536743 0.0668466124924 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.473016220679 0.534860350844 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.109926161621 0.148594505496 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880736891528 0.134430193775 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059272862219 0.0742795772207 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.308975948622 0.324371583561 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.076634375049 0.0638462369009 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16286061497 0.228012699653 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403576342849 0.058150111329 69% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 8.0 Out of 9