Some people say that cars are best to use in cities while others think that bicycles are better. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is argued by many that the most efficient transportation in downtown is cars while some consider using bicycles is better. In my opinion, I think that using bicycles every day is suitable for people who want to improve health or to get body fitness, additionally, taking cars is a better way for bypassing the weather.
Cars are considered as a convenient conveyance for people who have to get to office daily because of saving time and moving initiative. Particularly, business men are usually taking cars as main moving vehicles. And this is also the most effective method to build their own brand for the development of the business. In addition, cars are recommended for countries, where having the variety of climates such as rain and snow, to transport for avoiding difficulties.
However, owning a car is out of effort for many, clearly residents in developing countries due to the price of a car is quite expensive while buying a bicycle is much cheaper. Additionally, it is the best method to develop citizens' health by taking bicycles every day. It is also contributing to tackle the issue of deteriorating public health in relation to weight. Furthermore, commuting by using bicycles is friendly to the environment which can reduce the proportion of pollution in the atmosphere.
In conclusion, bicycles are best for improving people' health by riding frequently while cars are seeing as the shelters for preventing the variety of disadvantages of country's climate. Importantly, using bicycles is considered as a way of decreasing public health problems and conserving the environment.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256140350877 0.247107548796 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.210526315789 0.15552993741 135% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0666666666667 0.0946569551029 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0491228070175 0.0501201869031 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0210526315789 0.0437536398559 48% => OK
Prepositions: 0.147368421053 0.122223957237 121% => OK
Participles: 0.101754385965 0.0403219363162 252% => Too many participles.
Conjunctions: 3.07659613648 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0385964912281 0.0326786765898 118% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0877192982456 0.0861751148067 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00350877192982 0.0214082191602 16% => More modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0140350877193 0.0119246538136 118% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1599.0 1933.38276553 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 316.052104208 82% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.12643678161 6.10592293882 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20519365927 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.4 0.37474360046 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.288461538462 0.284197041944 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.25 0.203843217982 123% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.157692307692 0.137313986986 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07659613648 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546153846154 0.560935902166 97% => OK
Word variations: 53.8541793508 60.7401812628 89% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0911823647 75% => OK
Sentence length: 21.6666666667 20.7725350517 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3684845253 49.5273876611 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5441176471 93.4120437189 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4705882353 15.2821509519 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.529411764706 0.594174754866 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01102204409 0% => OK
Readability: 50.5128205128 49.1922392462 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.8 1.69127372897 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.223415577113 0.332604825255 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.150107332106 0.102734651613 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0493494935381 0.0668474354756 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.634986803148 0.534917948617 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118498190315 0.148666948902 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106812971934 0.13441755203 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563566989946 0.0742828286743 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.304272121452 0.324241079732 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0477881974972 0.0640056729886 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162969880099 0.22793763319 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499842915702 0.0582452615562 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41883767535 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.88977955912 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.60220440882 38% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.00200400802 100% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.493987976 76% => OK
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Rates: 66.9450549451 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.0 Out of 9