some people say those who go abroad should adopt culture that country and some people argue that they should avoid adopt culture
give your opinion and discuss both view
today's modern era , people migrates in which whole world for different purpose . however, migration is the part of human behavior but some people says migrant should adopt culture. some people argue that if anyone goes overseas his should be not adopt culture of other country. an argument has been put forword that it is a debatable issue
some people say if anyone goes abrod ,his should be adopt local country culture . It will be benificial for him , because he can easily creat new contacts and incerase his knowledge. however, culture is an important part of every country if anyone knows about culture he can interact with people . however, everyone should know new thing of the life to culture ,it is essential part of any indiviual life . moreover some people are busy in their work and they shun to culture . They should some time spend with cultural activites
some people argue that , culture is identity of every individual and it espect of his lifestyle .If anyone forget the culture it seem to be he give up the identity.People who migrate should avoid to interact any other culture .
in conclusion , I firmly believe that people who migrate should adopt other culture in limit because some people change their culture and religon . It is not good think
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today's modern era , people migrates in which whole world for different purpose
in today's modern era , people migrate to the whole world for different purposes
Sentence: some people say if anyone goes abrod ,his should be adopt local country culture .
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Sentence: They should some time spend with cultural activites
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Suggestion: Refer to activites
Sentence: some people argue that , culture is identity of every individual and it espect of his lifestyle .If anyone forget the culture it seem to be he give up the identity.People who migrate should avoid to interact any other culture .
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Suggestion: Refer to be and he
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Suggestion: Refer to migrate and should
Sentence: It is not good think
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Suggestion: Refer to think
Sentence: today's modern era , people migrates in which whole world for different purpose . however, migration is the part of human behavior but some people says migrant should adopt culture. some people argue that if anyone goes overseas his should be not adopt culture of other country. an argument has been put forword that it is a debatable issue
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Sentence: some people say if anyone goes abrod ,his should be adopt local country culture .
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Sentence: It will be benificial for him , because he can easily creat new contacts and incerase his knowledge. however, culture is an important part of every country if anyone knows about culture he can interact with people . however, everyone should know new thing of the life to culture ,it is essential part of any indiviual life . moreover some people are busy in their work and they shun to culture .
Error: indiviual Suggestion: individual
Error: incerase Suggestion: increase
Error: benificial Suggestion: beneficial
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Sentence: They should some time spend with cultural activites
Error: activites Suggestion: activities
Sentence: some people argue that , culture is identity of every individual and it espect of his lifestyle .If anyone forget the culture it seem to be he give up the identity.People who migrate should avoid to interact any other culture .
Error: espect Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: in conclusion , I firmly believe that people who migrate should adopt other culture in limit because some people change their culture and religon .
Error: religon Suggestion: religion
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