Write an essay on the effect of pollution and daily waste created by human Give your opinion and solution

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Write an essay on the effect of pollution and daily waste created by human
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It goes without saying that,there is a crisis of pollution and it would be foolish to ignore it.however,different kinds of pollution and garbage have become most serious problems of today.These things are creating hell on the earth

Firstly,waste product and pollution are very harmful things. These things are badly effected on earth . The human those who inhale air , drink water and eat food all negatively effected by these . However,waste material and pollution are enhance disease and global warming . Day by day people are facing various health problems. In addition to this , wild life is...

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These things are badly effected on earth
These things are badly affected earth

Sentence: The human those who inhale air , drink water and eat food all negatively effected by these .
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, plural
Suggestion: Refer to human and those

waste material and pollution are enhance disease and global warming
waste material and pollution are enhancing diseases and global warming
waste material and pollution enhance diseases and global warming

Some species of birds has been disappeared cause to pollution
Some species of birds have been disappeared because of pollution

these effects the land.
these affect the land.

industrial garbage is big reason
industrial garbage is a big reason

We can save our earth and controlling the pollution .
We can save our earth and control the pollution .

Sentence: Nowdays , people use plastic bags and other unreycleable material .
Error: unreycleable Suggestion: ?

Sentence: These things are dangerous for our environment and human life ,it all not unreycleable and these effects the land.
Error: unreycleable Suggestion: ?

Sentence: This situation can be improved by taking some steps , we can use reyclable material as possible ,this can help us in controlling the waste generated on the earth .
Error: reyclable Suggestion: reachable

Sentence: Moreover government can make strict laws for industrialisation .
Error: industrialisation Suggestion: industrialization

Sentence: Next with help of science we can make ecofriendly material .furthermore if people use energy efficient vehicles .it is a good source of controlling air pollution.
Error: ecofriendly Suggestion: friendly

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Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 268 350
No. of Characters: 1343 1500
No. of Different Words: 153 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.046 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.011 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.679 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 100 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.471 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.389 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.468 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.118 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5