When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and the ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?
In this twenty-first century technology has dramatically changed due to rapid and wide advancement in technical field. Indeed, realistically, every developed nation endeavors to ameliorate them for the future development. Therefore, certain people deem due to this evolution the traditional skills and ways of life has phenomenally affected. But, I personally peruse, it is crucial for every nation to thrive persistently by adapting new innovations from modern technology. Whereas, it's hard for traditional skills to fade from the country or society.
Initially, most of the sustainable sectors s...
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Sentence: In on old farming house people are still using the old method for ripping the food.
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there are certain areas where technology drastic alterations, but the classical talent won’t effacement from the community or homeland
there are certain areas where technology is in drastic alterations, but the classical talent won’t efface from the community or homeland
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