Writing task 2 about students Who graduated high school should travel or work before starting college another arguments is that they should start college immediately discuss and give opinion
For students graduating from high school is the stepping stone to another interesting part of life. Some people argue that student should take time for excursions or indulge into employment before entering into a college life due to the fact that this brings heterogeneity, mature experience and intensity in further activities. While others state that they should instantly start college study to maintain their continue interest in study. In this essay, I will contend both views and provide extra arguments to support former view of activities before college education.
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Sentence: Hence, other than just to go with others intentions, a student learn about himself and his successful career choice.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to others and intentions
Description: The fragment student learn about is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace learn with verb, past participle
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