1.In the last century when a human astronaut first arrived on the Moon he said “it is a big step for mankind” but some people think it makes little difference to our daily life. To what extent to you agree or disagree?
Space research is unknown area for humans to explore. Last century, an astronaut getting to the moon, was known as a giant sign in human progress. Some people argue that doing such research rarely benefits to us in our daily life. Although the advantage of making space exploration is not so obvious, in the long run, I personally believe it will bring about good results.
We can make a comprehensive understanding about space by making exploration, which brings convenience to people, and also contributes to the technological development. It means that, from macroscopic and microscopic perspective, humans will know more about the universe and have deeper understanding of these planets’ interior environment. For example, some special materials existed in that planet will be found to provide more opportunities with studying some problems about mutation. What is more, because of the vacuum environment, we invent some associated technology products, like vacuum cleaner. Therefore, doing space exploration not only enriches our universe knowledge but also brings convenience in many aspects of life.
Exploring the other planets prompts us to protect the earth. It is urgent for us to tackle environmental problems through different views form outside the earth, because of deterioration in the environment. Through satellite monitoring, we observe that the glaciers melt gradually, owing to global warming to some extent. Subsequent, the countries pay closer attention to relevant problems and take measures to protect our earth, such as encouraging people to plant. Planting may alleviate such problems, which provides possible opportunities to protect our environment.
To sum up, space research helps people to broaden our vision, but also contributes the protection to environment. What the main purpose we make exploration is to make life more convenient. Despite being unable to take advantage of universe knowledge by exploring today, we are curious to learn more about it and take it into practice in the future.
- In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 61
- Several languages are dying out every year. Some people do not think it is important and say that our life will say that our life will be simpler with fewer language. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- 1 In the last century when a human astronaut first arrived on the Moon he said it is a big step for mankind but some people think it makes little difference to our daily life To what extent to you agree or disagree 75
- In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 67
- In many countries, the proportion of the older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend make positive or negative effects on society? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...per understanding of these planets' interior environment. For example, some ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, for example, such as, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54632587859 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06073288986 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575079872204 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0328569781 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.117647059 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167199909472 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556817257528 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037991138403 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104448191409 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386606545337 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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