In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Individuals
...volutionised the way we purchase things.Individuals in some countries like shopping through...
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...g through Internet overweight in stores.In my opinion,it is a positive developme...
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...ernet overweight in stores.In my opinion,it is a positive development. Nowa...
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Suggestion: Development
...stores.In my opinion,it is a positive development. Nowadays, individuals in mounti...
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...inion,it is a positive development. Nowadays, individuals in mounting numbe...
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... positive development. Nowadays, individuals in mounting numbers are keen...
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Suggestion: Through
...uses at home and they have many choices.Through Internet they can easily compare prices...
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Suggestion: But
...ly compare prices without going outside.But not only that,if customers are keen on ...
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... without going outside.But not only that,if customers are keen on some clothes whic...
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Suggestion: They
...s which are expensive in physical shops.They can find the same on Internet at lower...
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...shops.They can find the same on Internet at lower prices.Shopping online is also ...
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Suggestion: Shopping
...d the same on Internet at lower prices.Shopping online is also more eco-friendly.They d...
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...opping online is also more eco-friendly.They do not need to use plastic packagings.T...
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...y do not need to use plastic packagings.The shops online will send the goods to the...
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Suggestion: Customers
... goods to their homes by the expressage.Customers can never complain that they feel tired...
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Suggestion: Online
...eet because of shopping for a whole day.Online shopping is suitable to some lazy custo...
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...g is suitable to some lazy customers. Some customers, however , do not enjoy s...
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...customers. Some customers, however , do not enjoy shopping online because th...
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...hey think online shopping is not secure.They can try their clothes by themselves so ...
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...them in wrong sizes and do not know what consist of.Online shopping is also hard ...
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... sizes and do not know what consist of.Online shopping is also hard to discern betwee...
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... hard to discern between true and fasle.Another reason is they always go shopping with ...
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...y always go shopping with their friends.They often regard shopping as their leisure ...
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...ing as their leisure activities and a gathering of friends.They can talk about what hap...
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...activities and a gathering of friends.They can talk about what happened to them re...
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...ntly and something they feel stimulating . Thus , they not only purchase something...
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...d something they feel stimulating . Thus , they not only purchase something they l...
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...ey not only purchase something they like,but also boost their friendship. To c...
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...like,but also boost their friendship. To conclude, from what has been discusse...
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...lude, from what has been discussed above,I tend to believe that shopping online is...
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Suggestion: Suitable
...elieve that shopping online is really suitable for customers because they can meet var...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, thus, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53053435115 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24560331899 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 201.769395323 49.4020404114 408% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 241.5 106.682146367 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.6666666667 20.7667163134 210% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254011960686 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138513925516 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662897368412 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13757685679 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831590182544 0.056905535591 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.5 13.0946893788 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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