In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In a multicultural society technology has revolutionised the way we purchase things.Individuals in some countries like shopping through Internet overweight in stores.In my opinion,it is a positive
development.
Nowadays, individuals in mounting numbers are keen on online shopping because it is convenient. Customers can just move their mouses at home and they have many choices.Through Internet they can easily compare prices without going outside.But not only that,if customers are keen on some clothes which are expensive in physical shops.They can find the same on Internet at lower prices.Shopping online is also more eco-friendly.They do not need to use plastic packagings.The shops online will send the goods to their homes by the expressage.Customers can never complain that they feel tired and hurt their feet because of shopping for a whole day.Online shopping is suitable to some lazy customers.
Some customers, however , do not enjoy shopping online because they think online shopping is not secure.They can try their clothes by themselves so that they may buy them in wrong sizes and do not know what consist of.Online shopping is also hard to discern between true and fasle.Another reason is they always go shopping with their friends.They often regard shopping as their leisure activities and a
gathering of friends.They can talk about what happened to them recently and something they feel stimulating . Thus , they not only purchase something they like,but also boost their friendship.
To conclude, from what has been discussed above,I tend to believe that shopping online is really
suitable for customers because they can meet various of shops and buy the greatest one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53053435115 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24560331899 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 201.769395323 49.4020404114 408% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 241.5 106.682146367 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.6666666667 20.7667163134 210% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.138513925516 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662897368412 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13757685679 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831590182544 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.5 13.0946893788 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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