1. News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news, and would it be better if more good news was reported?
In today’s modern world, a growing amount of news and information on television or newspapers have considerably influenced many people, so news should reflect the authentic and unbiased information.
There are some factors accounting for publishing news and broadcasts, the most noticeable, is that aiming at a high audience rating so as to maximize profits. Another contributory factor is that, for many countries, news editors have to succumb to political pressure, distorting facts and misleading the public.
Living in the information era, people are bombarded with the daily amount of news, including good and bad news, from multiple media. Lots have become addicted to the bad news, as human wars, natural disasters and gossip; some media companies use the stories of people’s private life, seductive images and violent contents to appeal viewers, especially teenagers. It means that their thoughts and behaviors might be changed and shows a tendency to hatred and violence phenomenon.
However, the role of news media in reporting good news, such as someone’s achievement and human stories. Recently, many people, readers of the newspapers and viewers of the television shows, want to know the creditable events like a peace treaty, noble contributions, and the political positive decisions. Therefore, it would be better to report good news.
In conclusion, we are not used to the bad news and editors to decide which news to be reached to us or not based on their personal financial business and unpublished political reasons. In addition, we can ensure that choosing information carefully before reading and watching are indispensable to us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, therefore, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42471042471 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93256905134 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8112138458 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.727272727 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329157760037 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131829690871 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923525106753 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176064634369 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398625724278 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.