1. Some people believe that studying at university or college is a route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discus both views.
Nowadays, an increasing number of people concerned about that learning at university or college is a short way to a high-income work. Meanwhile, someone think that student should be get a job after graduated high school is a better opinion.
On the one hand, working straight after graduation is beneficial in some ways. Firstly, student graduated high school who can have a job will earn money to their living. They can buy all of things they need or they like and they will be able to live independently on their own income. Moreover, it is clean that they can go out and enrich their and broaden horizon about over the world. For example, they can have a travel to some different countries and meet someone who has the same their ways. This travels will improve their experience not only about world but also open new chance for them.
On the other hand, there are several reasons why people tend to choose to continue their education after high school. Firstly, in university, student can appreciate their knowledge about their major and they to meet higher-level qualifications, which is what most employed expect these days. University graduates usually get a much higher salary than those without university education. Secondly, they can have chance to get scholarship to over-sea. They able to go to other countries which have better education and they will have a new life.
In conclusion, I think that go to university, college or go job straight after school depend on their own perspective. People need to respect their determination.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
... a high-income work. Meanwhile, someone think that student should be get a job after ...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'got', 'gotten'?
Suggestion: got; gotten
...e, someone think that student should be get a job after graduated high school is a ...
^^^
Line 2, column 414, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'travel'.
Suggestion: travel
...r the world. For example, they can have a travel to some different countries and meet so...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96923076923 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68973503457 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542307692308 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0458641156 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.1333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155979547992 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653743537593 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549284007995 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126523157187 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531406759956 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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