2. International travel make people prejudiced rather that broad minded what are its causes and measures.
What measures can be taken to solve this problem?
In recent years, international travel has been considered as one of the causes of people prejudiced rather than opened minded around the world. Various causes of this phenomenon should be identified by both governments and individuals before any actual solutions are considered.
There are a number of reasons why travellers are more opinionated. First of all, since travellers are not usually prepared enough knowledge or information for themselves to learn the differences from other cultures, they will be easy to get shocked during their travel period. For examples, tourists might see Indian’s people using their hands to grab food on the tables, which drives them to an assumption about the hygiene of Indian inhabitants. Moreover, in order to earn money, some local residents might annoy visitors by their actions, such as inviting tourists many times to buy their local accessories. This would make tourists upset, which contributes to the rating of them to those places.
However, there are still some solutions that can be taken to mitigate the problem. First, by providing clearly information for clients in advance, travel agencies can help to strengthen the locals’ images in the public’ eyes. This benefits not only residents but also tourists, which helps to reduce misunderstanding conception among travellers. Second, since tourism is one of the most important aspects of the economy, governments and corporations should take steps to ensure that proper training is provided to their citizens. By doing this, local people can do business properly to advertise their places to others, which allows the destinations to attract more tourists with opened-minded.
In conclusion, the lack of research about the destinations and lack of skills to serve better services are two main causes of tourists with opinionated. While governments and corporations have to invest funding in educating their citizens, it is important to have long term plans in order to develop local businesses at well-known tourist attractions
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'termed'.
Suggestion: termed
... citizens, it is important to have long term plans in order to develop local busines...
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Line 4, column 351, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nesses at well-known tourist attractions
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45253164557 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91728043839 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626582278481 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3356717026 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.071428571 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164462937576 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602807894405 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609321869756 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105926479876 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750064394343 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.