There are many people who go to live in different countries. To what extent should people be allowed to move freely between countries and live where they choose? What are the benefits and drawbacks of this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent decades, immigration has been receiving a great deal of media attention due to its substantial impacts on human life. Although some politicians may argue that moving freely among nations should follow governments' guidelines of each country, on the big picture, immigration offers a myriad of other significant benefits.
One the one hand, there are a number of reasons why people should be moving around without any restriction. First of all, since everyone was born with freedom right, each of us should be free to choose where we would like to live in this world. This means that individuals have the right to choose their nationality, which helps to enhance cultural diversity globally. Moreover, in order for tourists to visit other countries, they first have to apply for a visa as it would become one of the reasons why people do not like to travel overseas. For instance, the American visa requires the candidate to pass the interview, which prevents a huge amount of visitors coming to this country if they do not prepare good enough for the interview.
On the other hand, some disadvantages are listed. Firstly, if people are allowed to live anywhere they like, governments would be hard to control the crime rate. For example, a person committed a crime would easy to leave the country without restriction, which poses potential threats to other people's lives in other countries. In addition, since many developed countries open their border to migrators as one of the ways to push their economic development, they would lose their benefits if citizens are allowed to move freely. This means that the economy will be seriously affected, which leads to a financial crisis around the world.
In conclusion, while there are some drawbacks of free immigration, the benefits seem to be outweighed the disadvantages. Governments should consider future development for their countries towards this trend.
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Suggestion:
...for their countries towards this trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14376996805 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74160128933 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571884984026 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8897621831 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291619724891 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918881652913 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543418997196 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159884216001 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750121099784 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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